Task 6

Common mistakes that I always do in writing is my grammar is always upside down, with the subject-verb agreement mistakes, the punctuation, and using wrong sequence for sentences. My past and present tense also usually can be putted on wrong place. I think writing in English is so difficult unless we learn and understand the way and stages to do the correct writing with the grammar use correctly. The problem that I always face when writing is the ideas for putting in the supporting details with addition word are so difficult. May suggestion to overcome the problem is always practice in writing with correct ways. Learn from reading articles and book usually can improve writing.

Task 5

Topic	Water pollution
Topic sentence	What cause water pollution happens and what is the effect to environment.
Supporting details	Human throw toxic illegally to the river such as chemical waste from the factory
	Apart from that, human always throw rubbish to the river causing accumulation of rubbish in the river.
	Because of that, human are harm for decreasing supply in clean fresh water for drink
	Besides that, aquatic life such as fish and water plant will instinct because of water pollution
Conclusion	In conclusion, water pollution cause harm to human and environment and all caused by human fault.
Linkers/sequence connectors used	Apart from that, because of that, besides that.

Water pollution always happen in city. What cause water pollution happens and what is the effect to the environment? Human throw toxic illegally to the river such as chemical waste from the factory. Apart from that, human always throw rubbish to the river causing accumulation of rubbish in river. Because of that, human are harm for decreasing supply in clean fresh water for drink. Besides that, aquatic life such as fish and water plant will instinct because of water pollution. In conclusion, water pollution cause harm to human and environment and all caused by human fault.

Task 4:

In writing process the stage starts with given topic. From the topic should prepare the topic sentence. Topic sentence should explain about the topic. After topic sentence, four supporting details should be given. The details must be indicating the main topic. Supporting details should be properly explained. Lastly the conclusion from all the supporting details must be provided.

Example:

Topic	My regrettable childhood memory
Topic sentence	All people got their own memory. An event can be joy or maybe painful. I experience my regretful childhood memory in my life.
Supporting details	First of all, my regrettable childhood memory is I try to commit suicide when I was 14 years old. What I do is cut my wrist on the vein but no blood comes out.
	Secondly, I ran from the house because my parents keep blaming me for all that I didn’t do.
	Besides that, I become drug abuser when I was 14 years old because of frustration in house. Taking only the way to makes me feels better.
	Apart from that, I haven’t focus enough on my studies because of my social life with my friends such as smoking, hangout, clubbing and drink alcohol.
Conclusion	in conclusion, it is the most regrettable things that I have done before because the fault is now I have to pay for it.
Linkers/sequence connectors used	First of all, secondly, besides that, apart from that.